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【原创】七律.追念父母

2017-10-16 09:41:00| 分类：原创诗词文集 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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七律.追念父母

用韵：平水韵（十蒸）

用格：平起首句不入韵

作者：杨明华（为朋友所作）

心存大爱多行善，若谷虚怀不奋矜。
从教躬耕无怨悔，施仁布德有担承。
精裁巧织帮邻里，笃惠尤慈顾友朋。
历历洪恩昭日月，家风继嗣得敷兴。

朋友为父母立碑，希望我写一首律诗作为碑文，以追记父母生前之功德，根据朋友所提供其父母的情况而作！按照朋友要求，父亲与母亲在同一首诗里的份量，大体上均衡即可。父母合写成诗并作为碑文，这是第一次尝试写这样的文字，欢迎文友们探讨斧正！

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